Thursday, January 13, 2011

Twisted Road To Death Part I

It was afternoon in California. The sun was just setting as the moon rose into the early night.Jack and Zac  were driving on a long highway that stretched into eternity. As they were travelling, they drove past a sign which read "DO NOT PICK UP HITCHIKERS". They ignored this sign and own the road they could see a man giving them the signal asking for a ride. So they decided to stop and give the man a lift.
              As the car screeches to a stop, the man's face appears on the window. He looked kind of old, his face was all wrinkly, his hair was white and he has strange blue-fading eyes. The old mn has introduced himself. He said his name was Sam and that he needed a lift to his house somewhere in the woods. He also told Jack and Zac some of his personal details like; how old he was, his name, his family etc.
            Rock music was beating loud. Jack was the one on the wheel who was driving and Zac being a smoke addict was smoking a cigarette. It was an awkard moment, none of them has said much now. Silence...
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Sam reached for his pockets with his bony fingers and pulls out a knife- it glistens in the moonlight. Sam being the one sitting behind Jack slowly bring the knife to Jack's neck. The knife has done its evil-ripping apart his neck causing his jugular vein to spurt blood all over the place. Gravity couldn't help but pull Jack's dangling head down onto his lap.
          
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                                       BE CONTINUED... Stay tuned for part II

4 comments:

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Anonymous said...

good story but do double check your spelling .

Hayley and E said...

Thanks for the feedback .. :-) be sure to read part 2 thnx

Anonymous said...

where is part two? it's about time you uploaded it.

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